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                     Strangers on separate islands, safe, isolated.
                               Our eyes meet, dart away
                      Like tiny, terrified fish on a shallow shore.
                             And then we keep on walking.
                          Why do we never stop or say, "Hello?"
                         What do we have to lose, alone on our
                                    uncharted islands?

                              You might say, "I like you,"
                                 I might say, "Me too."
                        A weather-torn ship might pass between us
                      Piled hight with age-crusted hidden treasures,
                        Or soggy messages in messy handwriting in
                          Old bottles sealed with red candlewax.
                          You would laugh aloud as you read them,
                             Sometimes you'd cry, or maybe you
                             wouldn't know what to say at all,
                                    So you would say
                                         Nothing.

                          I might hoist a tattered flag one day,
                             a violent-red passion color and
                                  it would make you smile
                             because you'd know it was for you.

                           One day,
                               One day you would be distant on your island,
                                                                and I on mine.

                         We stare across the void of rippling water.
                          You shout something at me and I know it's
                                          IMPORTANT
                        But the wind tears it from your lips jealously.
                             You can't stand to stand so far away
                              So you throw yourself in the water,
                               My fearful cry stained with sand
                                      And salty tears.

                             Ocean-soaked you crawl onto my shore,
                                  My shore so empty and grey
                         Now filled with marvelous flags of woven color
                               And messages too loud for old paper.
                          The nights are filled with blazing firelight,
                            Darkness like laughter and warm embraces.

                                     We break eye contact.

                           The briefest of moments passes, an eternity,
                                Unwound, undone, never even begun.
                                           You and I,
                                          We walk away.
                                       You do not know me
                                     And never bother to ask.
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I've never written poetry before, so I wanted to give it a shot. It turns out there is a lot of unspoken poetry in me, and within a few hours I had six poems written and at least five more titles. Maybe I'll write a book of poetry sometime.

This poem is for all the people I've watched go by, but never met.
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~blueispretty Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
This is... wow. Anyone can write poetry (even if it isn't "good"), but to have it be as powerful as this piece. You never cease to amaze me, Rhyme.
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:iconrhymelawliet:
I agree-- anyone can write poetry if they give it a go (especially because it doesn't have to rhyme... the irony of me disliking writing poetry that rhymes...). Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
-R
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~blueispretty Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
That is a bit ironic... do you enjoy some rhymes? (Rhymes in generally, not poems that rhyme...). Thank you for posting it. It's really deep.
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I suppose so... Rhymes are just fine. Poetry means a lot to me (I've recently discovered); it's another great venue for story-telling.
-R
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~blueispretty Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
If you don't mind me asking (and yet I always ask anyway), how did you come up with the nickname Rhyme? If it's something personal, and you don't want to tell me, I understand.
Yes, poetry is a great venue for story-telling. I prefer Haikus. What is your favorite type of poem to write?
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:iconrhymelawliet:
I don't mind you asking. I was trying to come up with a name for our 'Wammy' group, and idea Dare had just for fun, and originally unrelated to cosplay. I was deciding between the letters R, S, and T, and I had an idea but I didn't quite like it. Then I forgot an idea I had, and then I remembered that it rhymed with the previous idea I had, and decided that 'Rhyme' in and of itself was an aesthetically pleasing name. Originally the name wasn't personal, but over the years it has developed personal significant meaning to me. One of the many reasons I like it is because it reminds me of a certain Finnish keyboardist/songwriter named Tuomas (from the band Nightwish), who is considered 'The Poet', a title which I greatly admire and pity. I like to think of myself, in a way, as 'The Poet', which coincides with the literal meaning of 'Rhyme'. There are other reasons.
I don't particularly have a favorite kind, because I write based on what... happens. Rarely do I write to fit a format. If I had to choose, quatrains are fun.
-R
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Mood: Wow! ~blueispretty Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow. That is a very interesting way to come up with a nickname. The process in itself sounds like it took quite a bit of time, but almost all good things seem to take time. Does the fact that R, S, and T occur in a row, have to do with you debating which letter to pick? I know what you mean about names developing a meaning to a person, even if it didn't really mean anything significant at first. That's really cool, about the songwriter named Tuomas. 'The Poet' suits you, if you don't mind me saying, because your poetry is amazing.
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It only took about two or three days. It happened without me noticing, really. I'm not sure what you mean about the occurrence of the three letters in a row-- those are the letters I liked the sound of best.
Thank you; I like to think of myself as 'The Poet', and am glad to have confirmation on it.
-R
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This is really beautiful
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:iconrhymelawliet:
Thank you very much.
-R
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